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Welp...Now i'm in love with this too sighghhhh

Nooooo I didn't want it to end...like omg I love this so much. I enjoy arguing with Mr. Grumpy Sirruud aka soon to be the love of my MCs life.

I was thinking the same. Like maybe keep the text type option for those who have the more specific pronouns they want; yet have the basic multi choice preset options too, for the common ones.  To avoid confusion.

And I also agree, remove the text from out of the box itself so people don't have to delete and re-type every time. The example can be put to the side or under the box.

The font is hard to look at...not the color but the actual font. I'd say maybe add more font options, if that's possible. 

Other than that, not much to give an outward opinion but based on the summary i'm looking forward to more

sigh Idk if i'm mixing up blogs but on tumblr I believe the author has unfortunately dropped the game. So none of that will be coming unless Sahara decides to come back to it one day 😮‍💨😭 They have a lot going on if I remember correctly.

I'm confused, I 100% chose people in general to be attracted to, but the Chris convo makes it seem like MC specifically likes guys. 

Also I never tried it but, If I did pick a specific sexuality, would we have still been able to flirt outside of that?

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😭💕 That ending cuddle scene with Val is just UGHHHH

I've read the current content of the series a Godly inappropriate amount of times and now i'm about to read it again. Stop creating such good IFs I BEG OF YOU!! STOP ENABLING ME!! My addiction to your work in general is not healthy. 

Idk if it's just me but, It's kinda hard to see the words on the screen. I think the font itself might need to be a little lighter(maybe White font instead?). Otherwise it feels like you're straining to read. 

Well, I can already tell this will be another favorite. We May not have made it to Chapter 1 yet, but i'm giving it 5 stars!! 

Dante pulls you into his arms, enveloping you in his constant warmth. (after choosing not to share a bed and trying to move away from him)

Basically he whole of chapter 5, which wouldn't be a problem if MC actually spoke on it more or showed actual discomfort; creating some sort of understanding with Dante and any of the other characters, that they need permission. 

I hope I don't sound mean, i never want to come off nasty to any of you writers/authors. Chapter 1 was great in that regard, it was actually acknowledged multiple times. But idk, I just think the best option would be to remove it as a whole. That way the people who pick it, don't get such a shock when the plot comes into play.

This is a late response but just in case you weren't aware yet

The author is still active on Tumblr...They're mostly working on their other IF Dead Weight and Whisper will be- or is- currently being revamped.

Oh yea, There was a poll asking if people wanted the new  prologue sooner or if they were okay with waiting longer for that and chapter one. Waiting won the poll, so it will be a little longer. 

@plazahag Are you still writing this or your other game?

Loved the update!! I just felt like there weren't any real responses from MCs choices- dialogue wise. The characters ask us something for example, but once we answer there's no acknowledgement. They just kinda move on.

Outside of that all I can say is...I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE HOST!!

Looking forward to more!! I think I'm already in love with Argo

Nothing but tears 😭

I like it so far, I look forward to what's next. 💕 I can't wait to find out what the freak took place and what MCs future holds.

If I do have any feedback: My only thing would be ( something that I don't mind trying to get used to, as you update. )- But the text being typed in a bullet point kind of style. It was making it hard to get really into it- immersion wise. It sometimes felt like I was just stating actions and events; versus reading a plot. Almost how poems are written in lines. 

Mind you, this isn't really a huge issue. It doesn't make your game unbearable to read at all. I think it's more of a personal qualm than anything, my mind is just used to seeing paragraph format.

I LOVVEE THISS SO FAR...I hope it's still in progress.

😔🥺Sometimes when you really love something, you have to let it go. We have to let go. It’s time. At least we can say, we never gave up hope. 

Still holding on with every breath...though deep down I know- I know that it shall be a breath that holds no fruition. 

*sniffle*  I don't know, Maybe it's time to just accept the fact, that there will never be a return and we'll never know if Anya is okay. 

An unfortunate mystery left to linger.

I need mooreee!!! This is really good.

Hii, I don't think the Frank/Secretive and Sociable/Distant stats are working 100%. I could def be tripping honestly. But Whenever I'd go to the dashboard those stats seemed to stay Centered. 

Idk though, It could easily be due to my bad eyesight paired with the lack of visible number(percentages) on the stats, that's tricking my brain into just thinking they haven't moved Lol.

That being said, I thought that maybe It'd only be noticeable if large effects had been made but when I tried to pick choices likely to correspond, after a while I still hadn't seen any vivid change.

You can meet Arthur when we are sent into the book by that witch. He's a knight or something for the King, i believe you can only get him in two ways, i'm not sure but either: Chris needs to be alive and a part of your group OR had to have hooked up with your boss Morgan.

I noticed that in one of my plays, in which I DIDN'T have Chris because he died (i hadn't hooked up Morgan either);  I ended up NOT getting Arthur but, you do meet a Servant girl instead.

Me actually holding back tears over Arthur. That instant connection and longing for it not to end, but knowing it has too. Him waking up to MC not being there and him having to remember the moment they shared, yet will never have again. Just knowing he probably awoke and stood at the window reminiscing  about the temporary connection shared.

GOSH THEY DIDN'T EVEN KNOW EACH OTHER BUT IT STILL HURTS LOL!! I want Arthur 🥲

During the scene with Leona, she brings up having a fear of blood but I definitely don't. I restarted just to make sure I chose the opposite at the beginning after importing; but it still says it. 

Okay, So I feel like this is going to be really good !! I like it.

But right now, Every option, except for the flirting one, where you choose how to respond to Elex trying to get our attention; an error pops up. Some of the coding symbols are visible in the text. Also, if you choose to talk to her about the war, the conversation goes nowhere- like a loop, i guess. Idk how to explain it. 

It's like we get the options to talk about it, then it takes us back to the angel and war questions, to give us a chance to ask whatever one we didn't bring up before, But if we say "forget it" it's like we automatically didn't ask anything at all, even though you at least asked one of them. After that; like another comment said, it stops there. But i'm not sure if that's just where the demo ends or if that's a mistake.

Lastly, I saw you were sick, so I hope you get well soon!! Take your time.❣

same for me

Well...there isn't much buuuut I can already tell...

I LOVE THIS!! SIIGHHH Why did it have to end right there lol??!! I need more Maddock; he seems to thinks he's just oso smooth. I'm looking forward to the next update.

I will say though; It's really hard to see. Left my eyes a little strained. The light font on such a dark background is a little headache inducing. Maybe a darker font like Monstarerri(lol I don't think I spelled nor said that right like AT ALL)

I like it, I'm looking forward to more!!

 The Only thing for me is the inconsistency with choices. I chose to be silent in the office, yet the dialogue from the man, is as if he cut MC off from speaking. Then when speaking to Callum in the dorm; I feel like the last option 'You have no more questions' shouldn't be available until AFTER we ask all the questions. Because I personally didn't ask any and just clicked that option, yet the dialogue automatically assumes you did anyway. 

LOOOVVEEDD THIS!!!

My one thing though, was that the options we get and even some dialogue doesn't really have room for those of us who chose Touch-Adverse. For example, when the brothers were about to bump heads, MC only had two options; both which included physical interaction. 

Will Our Touch-Aversion be brought up again in the future? Or is everyone around MC already aware? 

yep i love this already! i'm feigning for moorree lol 

I like it, it definitely has potential. Idk, what the rewrite will consist of but I am hoping the choices won't be so limited(option wise) further into the story. The dialogue, felt as if the MC as a person may already be set in stone, especially because the little Multiple choice options available felt restricting in a way. Like, no room to really grasp the personality we want. 

I love the customization, I'm looking forward to more of that. I chose to be a black Savannah and my name is Pup Lol.

Okay yaayye!!Tthats great!! looking forward to the revamp.

Hiii!! I know the game had been deleted and you said that it would be rewritten. Is that still the case? or have you decided to let it go?(which would be understandable, lmao my patients could neverrr)

There's an error on the part where we bump into the Tremellian. I chose to say 'be mindful where you're walking' and it had an error. Also, I'm not sure if it's because of the error but my MC instantly felt guilty, is that just how he is or is that due to the glitch? I'm guessing the error is meant to be a stat check maybe?